You'd already helped so much on IRC, but being able to re-read it here calmly (without Rin's assets being a distraction) is really useful. Much appreciated!
I suppose there's nothing to it, then. I've asked sexuallyfrustratedshark to read it over for me & she artist-picked it wonderfully and assured me it's not as boring to read as I feared it was... maybe now it's up to plaemon to shake any more kinks out before I submit it for rinharuweek and move on to the next prompt. :D *sweats nervously!*
P.S. I never noticed you slipping back into simple past! You're very good at hiding it, haha. I guess it's not as heinous a crime as some other tense swapping would be... :'D
Re: rinharu week
Courtneysenpai! <3You'd already helped so much on IRC, but being able to re-read it here calmly (without Rin's assets being a distraction) is really useful. Much appreciated!
I suppose there's nothing to it, then. I've asked sexuallyfrustratedshark to read it over for me & she artist-picked it wonderfully and assured me it's not as boring to read as I feared it was... maybe now it's up to plaemon to shake any more kinks out before I submit it for rinharuweek and move on to the next prompt. :D *sweats nervously!*
P.S. I never noticed you slipping back into simple past! You're very good at hiding it, haha. I guess it's not as heinous a crime as some other tense swapping would be... :'D